Categories: uncategorized
Date: 18 October 2005 20:17:12
I shall continue in the same vein then! I wrote various poems when I was a teenager which I've always wanted to show people to see what they thought. Mebbe I'll put some here. They were sent off to a publisher once, years ago, and were accepted for publishing, except that they wanted some money up front, which, at the time, I didn't have (that had a lot of commas in it).
Here goes then.
I hurt
the pain surges through me
like a bolt of lightening in the sky
across me
paralysing me.
The physical pain
having deeper meaning?
Mirroring my spiritual pain?
My state of mind
my loneliness like a sword in me
my sadness like a gun in my head
I hurt
inside and out.
cure?
If only I knew of one
would I apply it
would I relieve the soaring pain
or continue
to suffer
for ever?
Hmmm...